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Galactic Trails random Episode sripct

Posted by icefire23 - March 15th, 2010


Well first before i start this the new charcter's name is Hell. Hell is a demon echidna .The group met Hell before during the M.F.

Yoshi: SO WHY are you guys here?
rouge: We're trying to save the galaxy.
Yoshi: Okay but why are you HERE on this planet!?
Shadow: we're collecting galactic rings.
Yoshi: gal-WHAT?!
Sonic: These.(Pulls out a ring)
Yoshi OH I SEEN THOSE!
Peach: Where?
Yoshi: there's a temple with one of those.
Shadow Mario: okay how do you know?
Yoshi: the temple has a monitor.
Mario: how conivenit.
Hell: Yeah really. i say we go already.
Yoshi: I'd be careful.
Amy: Why?
Yoshi: the temple is booby trapped.
Wario: Pfft!
Kncukles: What's so funny?
Wario: he said BOOBY!
Daisy:(SLAPS wario in the back of the head.)
Waluigi: yeah you kinda desreved that.
Luigi: what else should we know?
Yoshi: Well traps are ALL over the freaking place.
Blaze: anything else?
Yoshi: no tht's pretty much it.
Tails: Thanks for the help Yoshi.
Yoshi: no problem take as long as you ned to prepare.
Bowser Jr: I say we sleep the night!
Shadow: I say you SHUT UP!
Cream: ouch...
(the group arrives and rouge springs the first trap, the door grows spikes)
Sonic: OH YEAH!(Sonic and Shadow dash away with amy holding Sonic)
(they group seemed to make it)
Luigi: THAT...was too close!
Sonic: THAT WAS AWESOME!
Tails: yes now flush out all that adrenline.
Sonic: fine.
Peach: I don't like this place...not at all.
Mario: We've been to LOT of place we don't like.
Rouge: Maybe there is some othe treasure in here!
Hell: oh please THAT will be all for me.
Kncukles: SHUT UP!
(and yet again Rouge step on a plate which casused the cll and walls to close in)
Daisy: THANKS!
Rouge:Sorry.
Emerl: WHAT DO WE DO!?
Shadow Mario: we hold these things off until we find a way out.
(Silver Emerl Shadow and Kncukles wre holding off the walls and celling)
Emerl: What are these things made of!?
Mario: come on there has to be SOME way out!
Peach: (Steps on a brick and the group falls)
Cream: Hey look!
(the ring floated above the altar)
Peach: I'll get it!(walks toward the ring)
Shadow hmm...
Silver: What's wrong?
Shadow: Something's NOT right?
Daisy: what do you mean?
Shadow: this whole place is trapped but there is no trap here?
Waluigi: maybe the people who bulit this thought someone would leave after the first trap.
Hell: Does seem like that way.
Shadow: unless
(Peach grabs the ring)
Mario: PEACH DON'T!
(Before Peach could respond she turned to stone)
Jr: How are we going to cure THIS?!
(before the group had a chance to get Peach or th ring a group of Bounty hunters appeared and snagged them both)
Amy: HEY COME BACK HERE!
(The group chased the hunters from the long hallway the hunter threw sleep gerades)
Silver: I got-
(one geradne hit the group)
Mario:Peach...(passes out.)


Comments

It was great and all but instead of doing a story in a post, you should make it into a flash movie. Obviously you'll need to talk to a flash author to help you make it.

what was your favorite part?

I think the grenade part was cool.